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Fear
Aug 26, 2005 14:37:06 GMT -5
Post by Elassa on Aug 26, 2005 14:37:06 GMT -5
Not sure if I've put this up before....
She fears nothing She has nothing to fear I've watcher her from behind her own eyes I'm whispered in her ear
I've tried to make her fail I've tried to make her afraid I've bombarded her mind I've cleared confidence in a raid
She's fought well I wish her the best of luck Because I know she'll lose I'll make her so sick she'll chuck
She can't fight me alone I know because she's tried I've hit her again and again I think her brain is fried
What's she doing now? Is she fighting back? Doesn't she know she can't win? Doesn't she know I have a hard pack?
She can't win Not alone What's going on? My cover's blown!
She saw through my lies She saw through the shadows Who's that with her? What's this light that grows?
Someone save me! It's HIM! He's burning my flesh! NO! Not again!!
I battled this demon for almost a year. A tribute to those who have battled fear and won.
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Fear
Aug 26, 2005 23:08:41 GMT -5
Post by karenee on Aug 26, 2005 23:08:41 GMT -5
Ooooh, nice! That's a unique perspective to write from. I like this part, "Someone save me! It's HIM!"
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Fear
Aug 27, 2005 18:57:57 GMT -5
Post by Child of Immanuel on Aug 27, 2005 18:57:57 GMT -5
Kind of like the Screwtape Letters. Very interesting to ponder!
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Fear
Aug 31, 2005 10:17:12 GMT -5
Post by Elassa on Aug 31, 2005 10:17:12 GMT -5
I've never read the Screwtape Letters, but having that poem compared to them is really cool. Thanks!!
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Fear
Dec 23, 2005 14:29:22 GMT -5
Post by kg00ds on Dec 23, 2005 14:29:22 GMT -5
I like it. Very nice. My favorite line is-- "Ive watched her from behind her own eyes"
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