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Post by Child of Immanuel on May 30, 2005 9:03:21 GMT -5
Basically, make at least two words in each line start with the same letter. There's more to it, but that should suffice for beginners. To get really indepth, go to alliteration.net/fieldgd.htmI'll start with an exceedingly bad first stanza: The west wind wailed Moaning and muttering grief It saw the sad sister Innocence destroyed in tortured death. |
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Post by cree8ivone on Jun 1, 2005 23:07:21 GMT -5
Breath in sea sails
Breathing the freezing breeze
She sings a solemn song
Lingering alone; a longing dirge
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Post by cree8ivone on Jun 15, 2005 14:38:13 GMT -5
COI, jump back in here. Anybody else can give it a try as well. Words are so much fun to play with...
I've been burning to take another turn... here goes!
The Maid made her maiden voyage
to the village in the River Valley.
Her bitter tears told the story.
She would not soar 'til she ceased to grieve.
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Post by Janikz Rex on Jun 30, 2005 8:55:46 GMT -5
the Maid longed for a love unparallel
but she is an ill-fated individual foredoomed for loneliness
could there be a cure for her uncommon curse?
or will she forever sing her sad song?
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Post by cree8ivone on Jul 5, 2005 11:49:49 GMT -5
Slowly the seasons seemed
to stretch and strain her song
'til nothing nice remained.
But then the battle turned...
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Post by kg00ds on Dec 21, 2005 16:50:54 GMT -5
It turned so terribly that night,
twas full of terror and torture,
She squirmed and she squabbled within her sacredd soul,
In that most miserable maddening moment.
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